Saturday, 29 March 2014

February's WEbook Challenge - The Winners!

As February is in so many ways a unique month, we thought it deserved a slightly different type of challenge. The task was to write a story using 28 sentences only. The sentences could be as long as intelligible, but there could only be 28 periods and no more. (Beware, we unfortunately had to discount some great entries because they had gone over the limit!)

We all like to have fun with the WEbook Challenges but they are also a great way to test and improve your writing skills. After all the hard work of actually creating the story, sitting back down to edit it and cut the waffle can be a daunting task and it can be difficult to know what isn't relevant to the telling of the story. Setting yourselves tasks like the February challenge though are a great way of learning to cut out what just simply isn't necessary. One WEbooker, VMorton, did just that. We note that she said she used her entry as a personal challenge to whittle down a work-in-progress four-page scene. Quite a feat to do that but we hope it helped!

So without further ado, we are very pleased to congratulate the winner of our February 2014 WEbook challenge...

Twenty-eight by VanillaLover97

And the runners-up:
Stranded by RJ_Urquhart
Milo and the Junior Hi by JRBeck
Last Words by TJHorsburgh
The Hostage by Wondersmurf
Clueless by angelb35

A wonderfully crafted entry with vivid prose and narrative, Twenty-eight was a thoroughly enjoyable read and most impressive that this wide ranging story could be told in just 28 sentences. 
Congratulations and thanks to all who took part!

We hope you enjoyed February's challenge and gained both enjoyment and some new skills from it. There are still a few more days left to enter our March competition where we're challenging you to write a story integrating five randomly selected words. And, if that challenge doesn't appeal, we've also got a special second challenge running for Women's History Month.

Thursday, 27 February 2014

An Interview with Aftab Latif - Winner of the WEbook January Challenge

With January marking the beginning of another new year, we decided to take this opportunity to set a challenge based upon the idea of something being reborn, just like the year itself. With over 50 entries that touched on a wide variety of topics, including (but in no way limited to!), relationships, deaths, families, fire, and motorcycles, we were as usual spoilt for choice with brilliant entries.

Every month your Challenge submissions continue to surprise us with their originality! The multitude of imaginative ways that each member interprets the challenge guidelines are often as brilliant as they are completely wacky, so keep up the good work guys - you're creating quite the fiery melting pot of literary competition!

January's challenge winner was Aftab, with his brilliant entry, Snow. Although there was a host of brilliant entries, Aftab's interpretation of rebirth successfully drew a touching portrait of rebirth through a focus on the fragility of human relationships, which more than surpassed the challenge brief - so we really had no choice but to crown him our winner!

Following on from his win, we had a chat with Aftab to find out a bit more about where he found his inspiration for, Snow, and how he approaches his writing...


WEbook: Hi Aftab, congratulations on being crowned the winner of our New Year’s Challenge with your brilliant entry, Snow

The topic of 'something being reborn', was really open ended… how did you narrow down and decide upon the direction of your submission when the guidelines allowed for so many different options?

Aftab Latif: First up, as etiquette dictates, hello and thank you for the win and the chance to even participate in such a great event. Means a lot!

OK, so I had to smile when I read this question, mostly because this is the element of the monthly challenges I feel I am the worst at. I get the sense you guys are looking for something that’s radical and outside the box, but also something that adheres as strongly as possible to the outlines of the challenge. I always tend to go one way or the other, and I can never get it right. 

This was the first time, however, that I really felt I’d nailed it.

My first thought was a literal interpretation of rebirth in terms of human life, but I thought that was too obvious. I am sure I had several other ideas on the opposite side of the spectrum that I ended up scrapping for being too vague. Ultimately, I decided I didn't want the physical sense of rebirth to be the centre of the story; rather, it would be something peripheral that influenced a more spiritual sense of the theme. 

Thusly Snow was born.

WB:  Snow, provides an emotional insight into the cyclical development of father-and-son relationships, and it’s touching in its parallel exploration of this relationship within both genetic and circumstantial parenthood. Where did you get your inspiration from for the story?

AL: As with all of my writing, I never get it right the first time, and this story evolved from another one. My initial idea was to write a short thesis on youth, imagination and innocence, how those things are lost with time and how they are reborn through the process of having children. My idea was to have a father bring his son to an old family home and look in the nearby woods for a magical kingdom he had visited as a child. The father can’t find it anywhere but his son easily sees it. Perplexed, the father asks where it is. The boy eventually leads him to a dilapidated old tree house. The father doesn't recognise it at all, but through his son’s enthusiasm and imagination, he slowly begins to remember the magical kingdom he had concocted there himself as a child so many years ago. 

Heavy Peter Pan themes, I know.

Looking back, I think that too would have been a good submission, but I struggled to include everything I wanted in 1000 words. The core tenets I had raised in those earlier drafts survived, however, and fuelled the idea for Snow. The main concept of rebirth was that of perception, an adult seeing things from a child’s perspective and learning from it to improve themselves and their relationships. The clever thing I managed to utilise in Snow that I couldn't have done in the previous iterations was to included a direct example of rebirth too, i.e. the snowman.

Two birds were killed with one stone. I was happy with the end result.

WB: The metaphor of the snowman and the puddle used within the story is a powerful one, the more it’s thought about in terms of time and relationships, the more it has to offer. Can you give us an insight into your literary intent within the metaphor?

AL: In its most crude sense, the snowman was going to be a red herring; then it evolved into the physical sense of rebirth that fuelled the emotional sense of it. The snowman was an interesting figure too, as it was my representation of youth: made of pure white snow to signify innocence; easily damaged or melted to signify fragility; and also as a conduit for human emotion, especially children who ascribe to or project personalities upon them. It was this representation of youth that helped the adults connect with their children, and the process of interacting with or building the snowman that was an example of actions speaking louder than words.

WB: Your repetition of, ‘He wasn’t my son’, in the story, initially makes the main character a little unlikeable. Yet by the end of the story, and merely 800 words later, we have not only forgiven, but completely forgotten this rejection of the boy. Was this intentional in terms of the story being about rebirth, and if so, how did you craft this transformation?

AL: You know, I think this is what made the readers connect with this character, because it's true. People don’t resonate with something that’s idealistic. The truth is ugly, and human nature can be likewise. Let’s face it, we’ve all had those moments when we say something we shouldn’t. We’ve all acted first and thought second. We’ve all assured ourselves we have nothing but the best intentions of others at heart, but our own interests often betray those sentiments. I will admit to that myself. It’s what makes us human. I’ve always believed too that this is what makes the best drama. 

The characterisation was definitely intentional, but I didn’t think about it too much. I simply let the story go where it needed to go; I let if follow its own parabola, ensuring the transformation and emotional rebirth of the main character would benefit and feel more natural.

WB: You regularly submit stunning pieces to the Monthly Challenges, and you were a runner up in the August and December Challenges, before being crowned our January winner - where do you find your inspiration from for the stories you submit to the challenges? Are they parts of longer stories you have written or do you write them especially?

AL: Finding inspiration is usually quite easy for me. Loquacious as I seem right now, I can be very quiet and introspective, particularly in large groups. I’ll often pick up on a few words spoken by someone, and I’ll invent scenarios and stories based on that. My mind wanders easily. Music helps me get in the right emotional state, especially ambient Indian music (though if I’m in more of a party mood it’s straight up electro-funk). Other than that, my favourite source of inspiration is to purposefully bore myself. I’ll go out for a run and pump white noise through my ipod. The brain is a surprisingly needy organ; stop dumping sensory info into it and it will start to entertain itself with all kinds of crazy crap.

Except for the NaNoWriMo challenge, all my entries thus far have been original and created solely for the challenges. I find it impossible to use a random scene from a longer work, as every story I write needs a conclusion or a sense of completion. Plus, I think using a segment of existing work feels like cheating and invalidates the whole point of the challenge. For me, I love being given the chance to write something new, to develop new ideas that I can expand or to test my skills in restrictive challenges both as a writer and an artist.

WB: What other things have you written? Have you ever had anything published in magazines, blogs, books? 

AL: Nothing. No, no, and no. Except for fanfiction, I haven’t published a thing – but then I haven’t submitted anything either. Since I graduated from university, a good three and a half years ago, I’ve been working on my first manuscript (a snippet of which I entered into the NaNoWriMo challenge; a couple of chapters worth have found their way in a dedicated project too) and I’m probably around 10,000 words from finishing the first draft. I’m hoping to kick my butt into gear to finish it and start shipping it out to agents who can have a good throaty chuckle at my feeble attempts to make it as a writer.

I can honestly say this is the first time my writing has ever paid for anything. (I was seriously contemplating buying my own i-Pad myself, having had it dangle so close to me for so many unsuccessful months! Glad I stuck that one out). But I am optimistic about my future. I think I can write. I know I can. Whether I can sell...? That’s another question entirely.

WB: Can you tell us a little bit about your writing style. What first inspired you to write? And, what or who continues to inspire you?

AL: Writing for me began as a hobby. Being born into an Indian family and living in England often made me feel like I was subjected to two different cultures, without really fitting in either one. Naturally, I was insecure as a kid. Luckily I didn’t resort to destructive outlets for this, but to writing. Writing was the first time I felt in control of anything. I could make a world where the sun rose in the North and set in the South. I could make an entire culture and country or destroy it with the stroke of a pen. It was wonderful.

I think I started writing when I was about fourteen. Funnily enough, I didn’t start properly reading until I was about seventeen. (Yes, you can’t imagine how bad my first stories were. Writing before reading is like learning to drive before you learn to walk). When I was younger I never thought I would aspire to be a writer. It was just something I did. As a teen I got into fanfiction. The wonderful thing about that is there is a huge readership for it online and the community is very vocal and helpful, intending to make the author shine as brightly as they can. I loved the sense of writing for someone else, as opposed to just myself, and my love of the craft deepened.

Combining all of that with my competitive nature and my desire to create 
(I also play music and would love to paint, if only I possessed the talent), I decided to attempt an original novel.

It’s three and half years later, and I’m still working on the damned thing. 

Being a perfectionist is hard work.

WB: What's your favourite book?

AL: The first book that made me fall in love with stories was George’s Marvellous Medicine by Roald Dahl.

The first book that made me fall in love with reading was the Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams.

The first book that made fall in love with literature was Midnight’s Children by Salman Rushdie. I’ve read hundreds of books since and before then and that is still my all time favourite. 

WB: Thanks so much for taking the time to answer all of our questions, Aftab! Good luck with finishing your novel, and again, congratulations on being crowned our January Challenge winner!


Don't forget that the February Challenge closes at midnight tomorrow! Our Challenge to you this month has been to write a story comprised of only 28 sentences...

Good luck to everyone who has entered! 

The WEbook Team

Wednesday, 19 February 2014

January's New Year Challenge - The Winners!

We're very pleased to announce that the winner of WEbook's January New Year Challenge is...

On the theme of 'Being Reborn', Aftab wrote a wonderfully moving tale about the challenges of family love that had quite a remarkable depth to it considering the 1,000 word limit. The feedback from fellow WEbookers was overwhelmingly positive, with many stating that they felt a huge connection with the characters and were incredibly touched by the very real relationship between father and son. 

Congratulations Aftab! Enjoy that iPad mini! 

As ever, the standard of writing last month was extremely high. We found it almost impossible to choose between some of the entries and whittle the number of runners-up down to just five. As one of our judges said, "There were some really great entries for this one and the 'shortlist' totalled nearly two dozen, much clashing of heads was done to get this result!" In the end, we chose six! 

The following are this month's runners-up:

Congratulations and thanks to everyone who took part! 

The New Year Challenge wasn't, however, just about writing brilliant stories. We also wanted to showcase and utilise WEbook's best asset - the writing community - to help us build an even better WEbook. 

The feedback writers receive is a hugely important part of the craft and the reviews, comments, and conversations on WEbook are what makes it such a great place for writing and collaboration. With this in mind, we asked people to focus on the ratings and spend time offering that all important constructive criticism. 

Our super knowledgeable tech team are busy analysing all the data from the reviews and, once they've finished doing their thing, we'll let you know their findings. Soon you'll be able to find out what would happen if the WEbook users were the judges, so stay tuned! 

The year has started as we mean to go on and we can't wait to see the talent that is going to emerge on WEbook over the next twelve months. Speaking of talent, the February Challenge is a great one for honing those writing skills... Good luck! 

Wednesday, 12 February 2014

WEbook Review Round Up! - A Selection of Reviews of our WEbook Titles From Around the Web...

As all of you WEbookers will remember, our first eight WEbook titles were published back in the final months of 2013 - Broken, Camp 417, The Shadow Spy, Dasvidaniya Rodina, Lifelights, Chaos Unleashed, House of Thistles, The Shadow Spy, and Moonfall: Tales from the Levant.  

Since their release, each title has proved a hit both within our own WEbook community out there in the wider, reading world - which just goes to prove that you guys really do know best when it comes to picking books!!

With more and more readers of our WEbooks every day, it comes as no surprise that they've made a great impression on people from around the world, both inside and outside of our WEbook community.

As our authors have been receiving such great feedback from their rapidly growing armies of fans, we've decided to put together a quick selection of some of our favourite reviews from around the Web for you.

And if you've read any of our WEbook titles, we'd love to hear from you too! Why not leave your own review in the comments section below and we'll compile all the best ones together into a 'WEbook Reviews' blog post...

Broken by Kimberley Reeves

'I'm on my way back to Jessie. Scattered to the wind, busted and broken, we all run to the people or places that will heal our sorrow, our guilt. It's always the same, a never-ending loop of success and loss, building us up, tearing us down" 
- Broken  

The Shadow Spy by Robert Lance

'My hand was shaking when I put the receiver in the cradle. I've always had confidence. I've never seen the short end of the stick, I had never ventured into anything unless I was sure of the outcome. I wasn't a gambler.Yet here I was holding the short end of the stick, rolling crooked dice in a dark alley... I'd close my eyes, one way or another.'
- The Shadow Spy

C Mash Loves to Read
Dasvidaniya Rodina by D.S. Loren

'We are a nation of laws.
It is the waterbear's finest accomplishment.
It is their genius to always act in accordance with their laws however often they change them to being more perfect...
As our laws are perfect, they apply to people who are perfect.
It is only reasonable.
No one is more perfect and reasonable than a waterbear'.
- Dasvianiya Rodina

Historical Tapestry
Chick Lit Reviews and News


Lifelights by Alina Voyce 

"Sometimes the questions are simple and the answers are complicated. Can't you come to me without knowing everything? I can tell you, will tell you, but I'd like to know that you trust me. Do you trust me, Mara?"
- Lifelights

Hull Daily Mail
Chaos Unleashed by Alec Sillifant

'He straightened himself, a defiant look in his eyes, and headed towards the fence and the road beyond. 'If they want Chaos,' he grinned to himself, his heart pounding with a mix of adrenaline, fear and excitement, 'then Chaos they shall have. But on my terms and my terms alone'.
- Chaos Unleashed

All About Books
- C Mash Loves to Read
Moonfall: Tales from the Levant by Vanessa Morton

“You angered the night gods. You cursed yourself. The gods marked you that night, yet you cheated them. Now they follow you, seeking vengeance if not from you, from your loved ones.” Malkha’s voice carried a peevish sound... “How many more lives will the gods claim until you give them what they seek?” The shrine’s flickering lamp drew long shadows across the old woman’s face.
- Moonfall: Tales from the Levant
Camp 417 by Finnean Nilsen Projects

'The wave pulled closer together, each man scanning in slow, sweeping movements. Ready for anything. They crept closer. The eerie darkness beyond the entrance playing on their fears. The night's events, so vivid and alive in their imagination, created demons of all sorts hiding in the gloom cast by the thick stone walls.' 

House of Thistles by Lanette Kauten - @LanetteKauten

'She really was my daughter in the deepest sense, as we had both experienced a rebirth of sorts. Except mine occurred at the age of five, and instead of moving into a life of love and security, I was born from fire into foster hell'.
- House of Thistles

- UKmums.TV's Book of the Month

Lanette will soon be featured as a blogger on the Huffington Post UK - we'll keep you updated when her first post goes live!

The WEbook Team

Wednesday, 29 January 2014

An Interview with WEbook's December, Christmas Challenge Winner - NJ_Wade

In December, we asked the community to submit entries to our WEbook Christmas ChallengeYour task was to write, 'an alternative Christmas story', and wow, did we have some seriously out-there alternatives to contend with! 

With interpretations ranging far and wide, playing on both historical and modern tales - our WEbook judging elves had a serious challenge on their hands! But, no matter how many fabulously interesting, original and completely enthralling entries we had, a winner had to be crowned. 

Our winner - Nyree!

After much deliberation, NJ_Wade's, Professor Moore, was picked by the WEbook elves as our Christmas Challenge winner - and we're sure you'll all join us in congratulating Nyree on her fantastic entry. It really captured the Christmas, fireside spirit and played on a timeless classic. 

Recently we had a chat with Nyree about her piece, Professor Moore, and how she devises the imagery which whisked us away to the warm, December fireside.... 

WEbook: Hi Nyree, congratulations on winning the Christmas challenge with your brilliant entry, Professor Moore

One of the things that struck us most about your piece was the beautiful imagery in use throughout. The line, 'It's like dreaming, but with your eyes open', was a particularly stunning visual metaphor - how do you plan and develop the use of descriptive imagery within your writing?

Nyree Wade: Hello and thank you! To be honest, I’m still quite shocked, but incredibly happy to have produced a story readers have connected with. 
As for the line, “It’s like dreaming, but with your eyes open,” that line is actually a variation of one of my favorite quotes by Anissa Trisdianty. The quote resonated with me, because as a child whenever I read a story, my mind would drift into a fictional world, and it was like dreaming. Even as an adult, when I read a book or come up with a story idea, I still picture the characters and events in a way that is much similar to using my childhood imagination. 

With regard to the use of descriptive imagery, I really wanted to use light and shadow to create a magical atmosphere. You know the feeling you get when you’re sitting close to a fire and everyone gets really quiet? 

The only sounds are those of the occasional pop and crack of the fire. It almost sets the mood for someone to tell a good story.  I really enjoy the mystery and intrigue that surround all myths, and sometimes wonder if there’s a kernel of truth hidden beneath every story.

WB: The challenge brief asked for 'an alternative Christmas story', you really kept the reader guessing as to what your inspiration was - we were geared up for Marlowe's ghost to jump out at any moment! Do you enjoy leading the reader in a false direction and then creating a surprise for them at the end, or was this unintentional?

NW: It was unintentional, although it would have been clever to have planned it that way! Sometimes when you write, the story creates itself, and you’re just as surprised by how things end, too. I write with a general idea—and then let the story unfold from there. My intention was to retell the story, ‘The night before Christmas’, and bring the author Clement Clarke Moore, to life as well.  I knew at some point I’d have to reveal his identity, the end just seemed the best time for it. 

WB: Are the characters that you have used in your story in use elsewhere in your writing, or were these original creations for the Challenge?

NW: Besides the use of non-fictional character Clement Clarke Moore, all others were created by me, and haven’t been used in any other work I’ve written. Professor Moore is the first historical fiction piece I’ve written, and once the scene was set, the characters took on a life of their own.

WB: Professor Moore has a nice old-worldly, almost whimsical charm to it, which is mixed with the timeless pressures of family life. What were you trying to convey to the reader through this duality?

NW: That sometimes the best stories are the ones that we create around us. Finding that delicate balance can be a challenge, but it’s not impossible. I really wanted to create a character that people could relate to, and sympathize with (especially writers). For me, I know that if I’m not careful I’ll find myself locked in my cave that is my ‘office’, pouring myself into whatever project I’m working on. It helps that my family keeps me in check, when the scale tips a little off balance.  

WB: What is your favourite genre to read in, and what type of influence do you take from theses authors when writing yourself?

NW: My favourite genre is YA contemporary fiction. It’s hard to pick just one genre, as I like so many. Anywhere from Science fiction, Romance, Historical Fiction, they’re all great! As for the story Professor Moore, I really drew inspiration from Luisa May Alcott’s ‘Little Women’, when recreating that old-world feel. At the moment I’m really inspired by the work of YA novelists Sarah Dessen, Jenny Han and Tammara Webber. Other favorites are historical fiction authors, Steven Saylor, Diana Gabaldon, and Jane Austen.

WB: You're a relatively new member on WEbook, having joined just last year, could you tell us a bit about how you found the site and what your first impressions were?

NW: Back in 2012 a friend of mine, Bu Domingez, had introduced me to WEbook. We both submitted stories for the Valentine’s Day challenge and had a blast. But, it really wasn’t until last year that I’d become an active member of the website. The people here are amazing, and are really what keeps me coming back. They’re hilarious, yet honest and make an effort to help each other out, which is something I really like. They genuinely care and want to see everyone succeed!

WB: What is your writing background? What inspired you to start?

NW: I’ve been writing since I was about eight years old. I remember my first story was titled, Dr. Friend, and my mom still has it in a box somewhere, with a bunch of terrible kid art.  I think my mom really nurtured my imagination as a child. We’d read a lot of stories together, and it inspired me to write my own. I’d make book jackets out of construction paper, and weave yarn through the spine to hold the pages together. When I started getting into British literature I remembered sitting in my bedroom paraphrasing Shakespearian sonnets for fun, and my brother peeking in on me, wondering when I’d get a life! But, that was my life. Literature and writing will always be a big part of who I am.  

WB: Thanks so much for letting us in to some of your writing secrets, Nyree. And again, congratulations on being crowned our December Challenge winner! We're sure that we'll be seeing some more brilliant entries from you in upcoming challenges...

If you have any questions that you'd like to ask Nyree about her piece, then go ahead and submit them in the comments section below!

January's Challenge is all about new beginnings, and you've only got a few more days left to submit before entries close for the month! So get writing WEbookers! Who knows, you could be crowned our next winner and become the proud owner of a brand new iPad Mini.... 

The WEbook Team