There was another great turnout for the 911 Writer's Block Challenge, a big WEbook thanks to everyone who participated! We will be adding many of your submissions to the 911 Writer's Block tool beginning in April. Those of you who made the cut will be notified via private message soon. Even though we've announced the winners and cleared the entries, the project will stay open and we'll add any new, stellar submissions to the tool on a rolling basis, so keep
them coming!
The WEbook editorial staff picked the best three block-breakers, and we awarded these authors one free submission to PageToFame.
Congratulations to all the winners! Keep an eye on the 911 Writer's Block tool to see the rest of the stimulating ideas WEbook users came up with.
It's also time to announce the next writing challenge: "The First Paragraph-a-palooza."For this challenge, authors must write a paragraph that starts with the words,
"Two days into the new year, I..."
The rest of the paragraph can be about anything, max 100 words (shorter is welcome). The best entries will reveal at least one specific aspect of the narrator in a creative and concise fashion. The deadline to submit is March 31, 2010!
Need some inspiration first? Check out a few great first sentences here!
Summer is right around the corner: Get your shorts ready! We have great news for everyone who’s not working on a novel. Or working on a novel AND something else. PageToFame “shorts” is up and running for essays, articles, poems, short stories, blog posts, and other under-1,000-word formats.
Want to try your hand at a travel article, a business blog, an epic poem, a short whodunit, or a foodie blog post? We’re ready to see what short stuff you’re made of. The introductory price is just $4.95. Get started here.
PageToFame Full-length entries advancing to Round 2... As if our brand new short content wasn't enough, WEbook has also promoted the first batch of PageToFame entries. Check out some of the top titles. As the pages and votes continue to roll in, we are looking forward to promoting more grade-A writing every week! ....and full-length Judges are here! Each elevated page will be reviewed by a judge, all of whom are
literary agents or esteemed publishing professionals, and their
feedback will be passed back to the authors. It's a great way to catch
an agent's eye! To meet the judges face-to-face (via a WEbook produced video) go here,
or click your way over to PageToFame submissions if you want to
test the writing waters for yourself!
Lastly, WEbook.com's got a new look! And as if all of this isn't enough...there were a TON of other exciting changes to the site including an awesome new navigation bar, a new personal homepage, and for the first time ever your have personalized pages for your PageToFame and AgentInbox activity and much more. Come join the party!
John Corey Whaley's journey to publication continues as he preps for his first trip to New York City! While there, he'll get to meet his agent and editor face to face for the first time, and who knows, he may even be spotted in the WEbook offices...
I decided shortly after Simon & Schuster bought my novel that I’d plan a trip to meet Ken, my agent, and Nami, my new editor. Having never been to New York, I figured there was no better way to experience it for the first time than now—when I have a valid excuse to fly across the country to mix business with pleasure (though, it’s hard to tell the difference these days).
And so, I will be setting off next Saturday to spend Spring Break (yep—I still live by the schedule of a student, being a teacher and all) in the Big Apple.
I was thinking about what this trip really means to me as a writer. You always read about New York City and its often magical power over one’s actions, attitude, style, etc., but what is it going to mean to me—a Southern writer who mostly focuses on rural towns?
The first thing that keeps popping into my mind when I think about my trip is Salinger’s The Catcher in the Rye. I’m not sure I’ve shared this with anyone, but The Catcher in the Rye, is what made me want to tell the kind of stories I write. Good God Bird is heavily influenced by Salinger’s story of a troubled young man who flees to the big city to figure out his life, the world, et al. There are several references to Catcher in my own novel, given that one character in particular seems to have a fascination with it. It may be stereotypical for a young writer to say: but I share this fascination. And, I think the fact that Salinger passed away just a few weeks ago has made the work more present in my mind. When I think about my trip, I think of Holden Caulfield standing in Central Park at the end of the novel and I realize that one of my characters, too, could one day come to mind when others have similar experiences.
I say this all to start a conversation of sorts. I’m always interested in the type of works that inspire others to write. I actually get inspiration from many sources, including other writers, movies, television, and even National Public Radio (as with Good God Bird). So, what books, movies, people, animals, places, sounds, etc., inspire your writing? I look forward to seeing what the city inspires in me…and sharing that with you all! --Corey
To learn more about Corey's journey so far, check out his previous posts here, and stay tuned for news from NYC! To hear some more from Corey's agent, check out Ken's latest Ask the Agent post.
Below are his answers to many of your questions. Thanks for all the great advice, Ken!
Hey Ken, I am working on a nonfiction book proposal. Is it up to me to identify a possible market for the book? How much market research might I be expected to do? I can take an educated guess, but is that good enough?--PENQUIN
Thanks for writing in and for your really good question. There is often a lot of uncertainty about how much marketing information an author should include in a proposal. My answer is pretty simple: A LOT. It really is your job as the author to indicate in the proposal that you have a full grasp and knowledge of the market into which you want to publish a book. If it’s a nonfiction book, presumably you are an expert on the subject, which means you have, or should have, what we call a “platform,” a wide variety of contacts and information about the market that the publisher and you can use to help market and sell the book once it’s published.
The kinds of information that goes into this are: competing and comparable books; websites; magazines and journals; organizations. There are tons of others. But the point is to indicate very clearly that there is, if there is, a large base of potential readers for your proposed book in the marketplace AND that you have a pretty good sense of how you and the publisher can reach them. Hope that helps.
Hi Ken, Thanks for taking our questions! Here’s mine: what is the most common reason that you to pass on a query that’s competently written, and has a good premise, but just doesn’t do it for you? Is it even possible to say exactly why you pass this type of query, or are you just kinda looking to feel inspired, and pass if lightning doesn’t strike? Thanks! --BEN L.
I am so glad you asked me this. Because I think most agents grapple with this every day. The long answer is that it is strictly gut or instinct. At least that is pretty much how I decide. I have to LOVE something to take it on. MAYBE one time out of a thousand submissions will I see something that I am very sure I can sell and will take it on, even though I don’t love it. But to be honest, it usually comes back to haunt me. Because these are usually one-shots, and as an agent who wants to work with the best talent, and help nurture that talent and help with career building, I need to take someone on who I feel has staying power, who has more than one book in him or her and who wants to grow, with my help. And for me that starts with the first book that I have fallen in love with.
The short answer is, as you say, I am “just kinda looking to feel inspired, and [I] pass if lightning doesn’t strike.”
This is, more than anything else, a subjective business. Lightning may not strike for me, but that doesn’t mean your work isn’t good and that lightning won’t strike elsewhere. That's why you just gotta keep trying. Don’t give up.
PS I think this may answer Jennifer Gibson’s question too. You and Ben are sorta asking the same thing…
Ken, This one has been bugging me for a while. Why do so many agents require us to put a word count in our query letters? Is this truly critical information, and do you automatically pass on word-count-less queries?--JOHN
This is a new one to me. I never ask for word count. Having said that, I usually get it, so you guys must be well trained! It is tremendously useful to know word count. If I get a middle grade novel in, for example, with a word count of 150,000 words, I am likely NOT going to have a look. It just tells me that the author doesn’t really have a grasp on his or her audience. I can’t waste my time reading it—even if it’s only the first 20 or so pages. After all these years, I know a red flag when I see one, and that’s one. So knowing word count helps. Thanks. Good question.
I know that most of your rejections probably come in the form letter variety, but I was wondering if you ever provide authors with more detailed feedback, despite a rejection. If so, how often do you do this? Is it to encourage the author to make changes and resubmit to you, or just to keep their hopes afloat? --ANNE
Rejections can be cold and harsh and mean and critical. Or they can he thoughtful and helpful and encouraging. So, good question. They take all shapes and forms. And I am quite guilty of writing both of the kinds I mentioned here, sorry to say. But if I really like something, and I have read it all the way, but in the end I don’t think it’s quite right for me, I feel an obligation to be clear (and helpful) to the author as to why it’s not right for me. So, yes, I will provide some helpful (I hope) feedback and encourage the author to go back and do some more work on the manuscript. But generally it’s not because I think I want to consider it again. I usually do not. It’s because I DO think there is something there, he or she should work on it some more, but it’s just not right for me.
Having said that, I have, and no doubt will again, reject something, provide feedback, and invite the author to resubmit when he or she has revised. But that is rare.
There really is no one way to do this. Each case is different. But usually a “pass” is a “pass.” We get SO much to read that it’s tough to go back to something we’ve passed on. Thanks for writing.
Next up Ken will be answering questions on the Author-Editor-Agent relationship. Post your questions in the comments section below. Want more insider info from Ken? Check out his entire column: ASK THE AGENT.
PageToFame has shown just how important a good first page is. A good book can easily go ignored if it doesn't also have a good start. Well, every eye-catching first page begins with a fantastic first line, so in our ongoing partnership with Poets & Writers, we'd like to share some more great first lines from a few recently published books:
"Jacob stood in the barn mouth and watched Edna leave the henhouse." Burning Bright (Ecco, March 2010) by Ron Rash. Eleventh book, fourth story collection. Agent: Marly Rusoff. Editor: Lee Boudreaux. Publicist: Michael McKenzie.
"Bernice was ten when her mother walked around the block naked." Hot Springs (Tin House Books, February 2010) by Geoffrey Becker. Fourth book, second novel. Agent: Ellen Levine. Editor: Meg Storey. Publicist: Deborah Jayne.
"The preacher came up the dusty road followed by the girl pulling the wagon stacked with bibles." Lamb Bright Saviors (University of Nebraska Press, March 2010) by Robert Vivian. Third book, second novel. Agent: None. Editor: Kristen Elias Rowley. Publicist: Rusty Shelton.
The WEbook editorial staff was hard at work over the weekend reading and enjoying all of the submissions to the One Syllable Writing Challenge. There were over seventy submissions, which was a truly outstanding turnout. We're glad so many WEbookers participated!
We're also jumping right into the next event, the 911 Writer's Block Challenge. For this one, authors are invited to come up with their own plot-freeze ice breakers. Not only will the top three entries win a free submission to PageToFame, but we'll add all good entries to the actual 911 Writer's Block tool! To enter, simply add another chapter to the 911 Writer's Block Challenge, but make sure you follow the directions!
And now, the winning entry, by krymsongkn:
Now Hiring
His desk was made of cheap steel, not wood. Liz watched the man on the desk's far side, her lips sealed tight. He leaned hard on thin arms, hands gripped to hide his mouth and keep his face stone straight. Brow knit, his gaze skipped from her left eye, to right eye, left eye, chest and back to her left eye.
"I'm not sure how to tell you this," his voice fought to be heard through his mask of hands, "but you are not quite what the shop needs right now. I know you know your stuff, and I've seen you come in all the time, but the job has been filled." Liz locked her jaw shut and willed her eyes to stop their flood lest he should see. She knew him, and she knew times were rough, but she could not give up on her dream job.
He could see her breath pick up speed. Her nose flared, her eyes filled with hate? Shame? Some sharp glare that made him bite his lip. "I thought you were a sure thing, but the boss chose to hold off 'til next month. He had some stocks fall through too. You know?" The rift made by his desk's top held him in his seat. Her make up ran. "If you send in a new app in two weeks I can try and put in the good word again."
She stood up, put on her best smile. They shook hands, and she left. The streets were sheathed in snow, and Liz' heels left the tracks of a hurt hare. From one floor up, Drew watched her cross the street, and sighed.
Thanks again to everyone who submitted to the One Syllable Writing Challenge, be on the look our for more writing opportunities, or maybe you want to do some more reading?
The first round of first pages have been promoted!
The WEbook community has been busy rating and WEbook staffers are now promoting the first “first pages”!
If your submission is still being actively rated, then your page has not yet received enough votes for a decision to be made. We look forward to elevating more and more entries in the coming weeks as ratings continue to roll in.
To add to the excitement, today is the LAST DAY to submit your page and be eligible for one of the three $1,000 prizes! We know that everyone is excited to find out who will win, but remember: All pages must get enough votes before we can determine which entries are eligible.
We will keep you informed as soon as more information becomes available, so check back soon!
If you haven't ridden the PageToFame train yet, now's your chance to hop on board.
Have any questions? Check out the forumsor post in the comments sections below, and we’ll do our best to help.
I'd like to share share a bit more about what I learned during the writing process of Good God Bird. If I could provide other writers with just one bit of advice, it would be to seek constant feedback throughout the novel-writing process. During the two years that I worked on Good God Bird, I had a close friend (with fine-tuned editing skills and a penchant for good literature) review, critique, and provide notes on my working draft. Sometimes I would send her (Randi Anderson) a paragraph, and other times I would send her an entire chapter or two. Each time, I could expect well-thought notes and suggestions to come my way. This helped, early on, to clear up any confusion in my narrative and also gave me a great sounding board for working through new ideas.
Writing a novel is difficult, very difficult, but asking someone else to read it and honestly point out problems or errors is nearly impossible! But, it’s essential, I think. I learned how to take criticism constructively because I asked for help from a friend. Be careful, though, not all friends make good editors. (Tip: examine a friend or family member’s bookshelf before asking him/her for help). If Dr. Seuss, genius as he was, is the only author present in someone’s home, he or she may not be the greatest authority on the written word.
Because I was able to share ideas and work closely with someone who provided me with constant constructive criticism and feedback, I believe that the publication process over these next few months will be much easier for me to handle. Already, my agent and his staff sent me a considerable amount of suggestions (all changes were of my choosing, ultimately) and my previous experience with editing, re-writing, and sharing ideas helped to soften the blow. I was able to take a deep breath, read their notes, and venture back into the lives of characters that I hadn’t thought I’d ever meet again. I learned to look at the editing process as an adventure, wherein I get to discover new things about my characters and work to perfect their stories before the world meets them.
Please feel free to post any and all comments below, or via twitter @corey_whaley.
A lot's been going on with AgentInbox lately, all of it exciting. We thought it would be helpful to do a quick re-cap of all the latest happenings. So grab your lasso (or your mouse) and let's wrangle some video clips.
Check out our first AgentInbox success story, Corey Whaley. Listen to Corey and his new agent, Ken Wright, as they tell the amazing story behind Corey's book getting sold to Simon & Schuster (video produced in-house)
Second, we've got the AgentInbox commercial, where you can watch Scott Waxman crush his slush. It will give you a glimpse into how the service benefits the agent's side of the querying process. And it's really funny!
Literary agent Ken Wrighthas returned to take some more of your questions! To make the exchange as productive as possible, we’re going to direct your questions in the next two weeks around a few broad themes. Ken will take a look at your questions and answer the three that he feels are most helpful (and creative!). What’s up this week?
Rejections: Any and all things related to why agents pass on certain manuscripts and accept others. The business is known for is subjectivity, but it’s always great to hear some of the reasons that agents reach for their form letters.
No doubt this theme will inspire a ton of questions from your literary brains. Hit Ken with everything you’ve got!
